Reflection: What stood out to me was how the feedback pointed out my progress in cleaning up my pitch, as I still felt like I had plenty to work on but also felt like progress was made. My enthusiasm was also a topic of discussion, which is a bit of a surprise, seeing how I have to use more silent enthusiasm than anything as I am at work recording these videos.
Changes: The changes that were made are mostly focused on cleaning up the speech so that it will sound more crisp and confident rather than me jumbling my words and sounding unorganized. Other than that, I tried to cut down on time to get closer to the desired 90 seconds.
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